Can someone revise this and make it better? I will give you lots of points! The authors of New Chicago draws on from The Monkeys Paw by using characters dying from wanting to be wealthy. An example of this could be "I was to say that Maw and Meggins disclaim all responsibility," continued the other. "They admit no liability at all, but in consideration of your son's services, they wish to present you with a certain sum as compensation." Both stories the characters were intoduced to someone in the working business saying an accident happend, leading to the business to pay the wished for sum. Although this is the same the instead of the character from New Chicago instantly going and wishing for his brother back like they did in Monkeys Paw, he thought carefully and made precise details so he could try and make sure nothing bad happened again. In The Monkeys Paw the main character was peer pressured by his wife in part 3: "No," she cried triumphantly; "We'll have one more. Go down and get it quickly, and wish our boy alive again."

The authors of New Chicago draws on from The Monkeys Paw by using characters dying from wanting to be wealthy. An example of this could be "I was to say that Maw and Meggins disclaim all responsibility," continued the other. "They admit no liability at all, but in consideration of your son's services, they wish to present you with a certain sum as compensation." In both stories the characters were intoduced to someone in the working business saying an accident happend, leading to the business to pay the wished amount for sum. Although this is the same, instead of the character from New Chicago instantly going and wishing for his brother back like they did in Monkeys Paw, he thought carefully and made precise details so he could try and make sure nothing bad happened again. In The Monkeys Paw the main character was peer pressured by his wife in part 3: "No," she cried triumphantly; "We'll have one more. Go down and get it quickly, and wish our boy alive again."

Explanation:

I added a word and crossed out a word. I looked over your spelling mistakes. Everything else is good.

agamemnon was the leader of the greek troops in the trojan wars and orestes was his son. when agamemnon returned from the war, he was murdered by his wife's lover in conjunction with his wife. orestes could not stop them but he seeked vengeance for his father. after a long time, he found them and avenged his father while killing them. he killed his mother, but greek mythology claims that his act was just and he was spared the remorse and the guilt. there are a lot of similarities with the ulysses/telemachus father son pair. ulysses was also one of the leaders of the excursion to troy. he still has not returned home, but in a sense the suitors of penelope are marring his estate and his reputation. while penelope is faithful to ulysses, the suitors by taking hold of the palace and committing their shameful acts are dishonoring ulysses. in the same context, telemachus is asked just like orestes to restitution his father's honor, regardless of whether he is alive or dead. athena is him and encouraging him with this example and he himself feels the need to save his father

1. an introductory word, phrase, or clause which is missing the word(s) it is supposed to modify- dangling modifier

words, clauses or phrases which add description is known as a modifier. a modifier is found before or after the target words that they want to describe.

for example: happily, she ran towards her father.

herein, happily precedes 'she', its target.

whereas, when an author forgets to mention the target and includes the modifier thus it is known as a dangling modifier, wherein modifier has nothing to describe. these are the errors which confuse the reader.

2. a noun or pronoun's function within a sentence- elliptical clause

it is a clause in which words are being left out. on the other hand, the missing word is understood due to the logic or pattern of the sentence.

for example:

she had five apples;   kanishk, three.

herein the verb 'had' is missing which is otherwise understood.

3. to quickly run: split infinitive

it refers to the construction of the sentence in which infinitive consists with the word or an adverb between to and verb.

for example, he used to secretly ate those apples.

4. a clause with either an implied subject or verb: elliptical clause

5. a word that joins words or phrases of the same grammatical type: coordinating conjunctions are the words which connect clauses and phrases. there are seven coordinating conjunctions that are, yet, so, or, for, and, nor, and but.

for example:

the boy refused to complete the homework nor will he take the punishment.

'and' is the coordinating conjunction.

7. pronoun with no specific antecedent: indefinite pronouns are the pronouns which do not refer to anyone specifically.

for example several, nobody, some and so forth.

8. a pair of words like either/or: correlative conjunctions

these are the pairs of conjunctions used in a sentence to join elements together. these are, , not also, and so forth.

9. masculine and feminine forms: gender

gender refers to the cultural, psychological and behavioral traits that are associated with a particular sex.