Read the following paragraph and revise it. (1)The ad with the father and his daughter effectively convinces people to get the flu vaccine. (2)Its purpose is to encourage parents to get flu shots for their children. (3)The target audience is parents of young children. (4)The text, which tells how serious flu can be, works with the art to accomplish this purpose. (5)Most people consider “young” to mean under the age of thirteen. (6)The father holds his daughter protectively, sending a clear message: “If you are a good parent, you will do this.” (7)The media technique that is used is universal appeal. (8)All good parents want to protect their children, the ad suggests, and getting flu shots is one way to do this.

How should you improve sentence 1?
Where should you move sentence 4 to improve organization?

Read this excerpt from "hope, despair and memory" and answer the question. and yet it is surely human to forget, even to want to forget. the ancients saw it as a divine gift. indeed if memory us to survive, forgetting allows us to go on living. how could we go on with our daily lives, if we remained constantly aware of the dangers and ghosts surrounding us? the talmud tells us that without the ability to forget, man would soon cease to learn. without the ability to forget, man would live in a permanent, paralyzing fear of death. only god and god alone can and must remember everything. which of the following is true about the above excerpt? ethos is used in reference to “dangers and ghosts.” logos is used in saying all men forget and want to forget, because the talmud also praised forgetting. ethos is used in referring to the ancients, the talmud, and god. pathos is used without loaded language.

Jeff's response to justin assumes that justin is following which maxim? justin: hey, jeff! jeff: yeah? justin: get ready for the news of the day! jeff: okay. justin: i got that job i was after! jeff: wow! that's great! justin: ! starts right now! later!

Which of the following is not one of the part of speech