Carefully read the excerpt from pages 93-97 of If Beale Street Could Talk .in this excerpt, Tish and her mother meet with Mr. Hayward to discuss Fonny's case, and his perspective on how to best support Fonny. a Plan the outline for and then draft a well-organized analytical paragraph in which you analyze how Tish's feelings for Mr. Hayward change by the end of the scene. Your paragraph should cite at least two examples of characterization details that develop this change. Remember that an analytical paragraph has at a minimum 10 sentences.

Me asap it's an e2020 test and it's timedread the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united statesis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.what revision would most strengthen sentence 1?