Please write a 500 character depressing story you will never forget

A summer alone

The sound of the beach sand is much louder than usual, or maybe I am just noticing it more because there are no more distractions. All I ever knew were people around me, or someone's voice filling my day. But now I've made myself hyper-aware of the fact that I'm not near people anymore and that all I have is the internet and shows to see the "real" world. I would never think of a lot, just what I needed to get by in life, but now I'm alone I started to think about everything and driving myself crazy. "Do I drink too much milk?" "Why does my face feel like that when I smile?" "I forgot how I look like again" "How does my skin color even look like, I feel like my hands and face have different shades.'' I don't know about anything anymore. This summer is my last as a high school student and I have a lot on my mind and because my family has money I asked them if I could stay in our beach house for a week to clear my head, looking back it wasn't the smartest idea to go alone I feel even worse but I think it's for the best to get over this loneliness now then when I'm older with even more on my plate. This past year all I did was do the bare minimum and lay on my bed the rest of the time. I tried to fix it but it was like a never-ending cycle. "HEY RUTH!" oh my beach neighbor is up early, my parents asked him to look after me to make sure I'm ok, not sure why he's not the safest person, I always saw him as the klutz of the group. "Hi Blaise, good morning" "Oh someone is in a better mood this morning, good morning" "I noticed that you looked off when you came over for lunch yesterday" "what do you mean?" "come on ruth I know you better than that, even when we were kids when you had a resting face you were smiling' "really? No one ever told me that" "well it's true! So anyway, do you mind telling me what's wrong? We are childhood best friends after all"  ''I...I don't know" I wish I could just tell him but I don't even know what's wrong to tell myself let alone another person. "Mhm..I understand but do you what to do something" "I would love to but a distraction is not what I need right now I need to be alone i...figure out what's causing this" "wow you did grow up huh..you never used to sit and think before you always just did stuff without a second's thought!" "Yeah you're right.." "ok I'm going to go but if you need anything you know where to find me" "thanks Blaise you're a good friend' "bye ruth I hope you find what you're looking for and come over tonight we're having a barbecue" "I will thank you, bye" Just like that I did it again, why do I keep doing that?? I never would have done that last year, what is going on with me... I think I just need to eat something. As I walked in, I felt the cold air that made my whole body shiver like a ghost just walked by. I tried to make myself feel better with a cute breakfast, but it made me overthink again, and I started to cry from frustration. "Why did I turn out like this? Isn't this summer my last to be young and carefree? Why am I obsessing over every little thing? I should be going...I don't have any friends...I push them all away.I'm alone again..where do young lonely people hang out?" I sighed as I went to wash my face but I knew I wasn't done so I started to cry again, good thing I'm alone or else this would be ever hard to hide, I try not to cry in front of people not because I like to act "tough" but because I find it awkward to try to explain what's wrong with snot coming out of your nose and them just laughing then you start laughing and it makes it seem like you're ok but you still deep inside you're not, so I don't cry in front of people unless it benefits me in some way. I'm just going to go eat my food with a romance book. I said I didn't want distractions but I need a break from this thinking. I went back outside and did what I wanted and felt better, maybe... it's just in my head, or I need a therapist, Nah I don't need one this can be fixed if I stop overthinking everything I do! Yeah, that's all...see was that that hard!...Ughh why am I like this!!! Oh shoot, I almost forgot about that barbecue and need to get ready now. As I was getting ready I couldn't ignore the fact that I felt ugly..again one of my overthinking things. What do I do? I'm confused, if I think about it I'm always confused.

Explanation:

In the end, she went to therapy and lived happily ever after yayyy

formal arguments

in written, formal arguments, the best way to build credibility with readers is to provide them with evidence. no matter what your argument might be and which side you agree with, citing strong evidence to back up your claim leaves the opposition with little to argue.

emotional appeal is often used in oral arguments. written arguments, however, rely on four main types of evidence. as you read further, you will see that some types are more credible than others and "hold more water" so to speak.

statistical evidence

the strongest type of evidence in formal writing is statistical evidence. this ranges from true, hard data presented as a percentage or number, to survey-type data. for example, statistical evidence could be:

4 out of 5 experts claim

85% of women in the united

7 members were present

statistical evidence can be proven as fact. you can actually go out and find hard information to prove your particular claim.

testimonial evidence

the use of celebrities as credibility evidence can be considered testimonial in nature. many people look up to celebrities as role models in their lives. good or bad, when a person chooses a life-path that takes them into public light, there will be many others out there who want to emulate the celebrity. these celebrity endorsements provide the second-strongest type of evidence found in formal arguments.

testimonial evidence can also be collected from experts and authorities in a given field. doctors, dentists, lawyers often provide expert testimonials. their authority is not often questions. they are expected to "know their stuff."

anecdotal evidence

when storytelling is involved as evidence, anecdotal evidence is being used. due to its less objective nature, anecdotal evidence is not extremely strong. when coupled with statistical or testimonial evidence, anecdotal evidence can be highly effective in determining credibility or proof.

storytelling, although based on fact, can include quite a bit of opinion, thus making it less objective. usually, eyewitnesses are used as providers of anecdotal evidence. they saw or experienced the phenomenon at hand are telling their version or side of the story.

analogical evidence

when information is scarce about something and little is known, analogical evidence is often used in a formal argument to increase credibility of the proof. if the phenomenon in question is new and little is known about it, analogical evidence that pulls in known factors about a similar phenomenon to show parallels can be an effective way to provide proof.

due to limited knowledge about the phenomenon, in this situation, analogical evidence can be regarded as the weakest type of evidence used in formal arguments. one can only imagine and hope that the comparison-phenomenon is close enough that the results can be applied to the new phenomenon.

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all that really matters in a formal argument is whether or not the writer has credible evidence to back up what they want to say or what they are thinking. so often, we hear people say, "prove it! " to one another.

one last little formal arguments not only provide credible evidence to support claims, don't forget that acknowledgment of the opposing point of view in an argument also strengthens the entire product.

isn't this axel talking to his uncle?