Who is the man in the white suit? *
Rahim Khan
Baba's brother
O Hassan
O Assef

the positive connotations of the words "pretty," "quiet," and "silence" give the excerpt a tone of nervousness. i think its this

“way of writing” should be replaced with “writing style"

“idea” should be replaced with “purpose.”

maybe   “people from a long time ago” should be replaced with “elizabethans.”

what i did was pick the character i liked best (i picked buck) and i looked up quotes from the book. i chose three characteristics that made buck himself. i chose to use loyalty, that he is strong and intelligent, and that he is competitive. i used quotes to show that they were true about buck. hope i