Read the following text from a student essay. How can the writer best improve his or her word choice?
Worms are long, soft things without a backbone. There are at least twenty thousand
kinds of worms, but they are not all related. They belong to several different big groups,
such as segmented worms, flatworms, ribbon worms, and roundworms. Earthworms are
members of the segmented worm group. They live in the ground and add good things to
soil.
by using more technical terms
by including more figurative language
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