California enacted a Three Strikes Law in 1994 in response to several high profile cases including the murders of Kimber Reynolds and Polly Klaas but repeat felons. The law has been eroded over time and many of the charges that were considered strikes no longer are. Is this change good for public safety? What are the ramifications of easing the Three Strikes Law?

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hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.