Question 5 (10 points) in this lesson, we have focused on using strong and interesting word choices, combining short phrases to achieve complex sentences, and
using subordinate conjunctions and absolute phrases. Use these tools to help you write a descriptive paragraph of three to five sentences
for the following situation. Use proper spelling and grammar.
Reading a book (10 points)

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i’m writing a memoir and i’ve been given the great suggestion of placing a ‘sub-narrative’ within some of the chapters – sort of, what was going on with me in the grand scheme of things.

i was wondering how to format this so that it is very obvious we are stepping out the of story.

firstly is a change in font from serif to sans workable? i also use dashes for a scene change. was thinking of using a different scene-changer too.

here’s a (shortened) example:

university – or what’s known as ‘uni’ in australia – were some of the best days of my life. where else do you get to potter around in a great location, have very little responsibility, learn lots of things, do lots of things and walk out four years later with a bonus – a degree!

with my university years i had immersed myself into community of intelligent ambitious people. generally everyone had a confidence about themselves. they knew where they were going in life and weren’t threatened by others.

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next normal paragraph continues here…

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too much?

hum i think it this

prewriting

proofreading

presenting

editing and revising

first draft

planning

proofreading

presenting

prewriting

editing and revising

its that you did not giving me more hope this