PL H MM Use this checklist to evaluate and revise your paper. In the space below, describe your evaluation and revision process, and submit your revised paper.

Does your thesis statement make sense?
Is the thesis statement well supported by the body paragraphs that follow it?
Have you presented strong evidence from the movie and the text to support your analysis?
Does the review clearly compare and contrast the film and the short story?
Does the review flow smoothly with clear transitions between paragraphs?

Please do not get the answer off of edmentum because my ELA teacher will know.