How did I do on my love note so far I took out my name because I would like to anonymous it is obviously not finished yet but I want to know if I'm moving in the right direction with it and what else I should add.

Plzzz me needs a hyphen or no hyphen 1. laura, a friendly little girl, says hello to everyone she passes 2. my uncle is well known jazz musician 3. our school's winning football record is welll known 4. the angry looking woman was having a heated discussion with the store manager.