Help ASAP Evaluate and improve the rough draft essay titled "Punishments in Dante's Inferno"
(see below). Strengthen the thesis, use quotes and summary in appropriate ways,
and make use of commentary to back up your points. Improve the organization to fit
your purpose, and edit the diction, syntax, and style to create a formal tone.

i believe that the correct answer is (d) the struggle between tradition and change.

explanation:

i decided to stay late in the laboratory to continue my experiment with the lightbulb. at midnight, thomas edison opened the door and saw all the stuff he was working on. the lightbulb, film and the transmitter. as he walks in an idea hits him on how the lightbulb would work. he would have to change a few wires around to get it to light up. when he did change the wires around it worked so he decided to write a telegraph to his friend to tell him about his success.   as he was packing up he grabbed the telegraph and walked to his home. he told his wife about the success and the next morning mailed the telegraph.