How do we know when
the introduction of a
narrative draft is
finished?

Whenever your thesis statement is visible at the end of the (introductory) paragraph

Explanation:

Usually your thesis statement is a combination of the introductory paragraph, or basically just re-iterating what your topic will be about. Some schools don't teach thesis statements the same way as others do. If that is the case, make sure your ending is clear and worded precisely. You are transittioning to the next paragraph, so also make sure your sentences flow into the next paragraph. Hope this helped! :)

as you read the passage below, consider how dana gioia uses

evidence, such as facts or examples, to support claims.

reasoning to develop ideas and to connect claims and evidence.

stylistic or persuasive elements, such as word choice or appeals to emotion, to add power to the ideas expressed.

explanation: