Tone isn't only in word choice. You might find clues about an author's tone in figurative language and in syntax. Repetition can emphasize certain words or phrases over others.
Using passive voice can take attention away from the person who did the action of a
sentence. Verbals can give a piece of writing an exciting tone by adding descriptions of
action. Authors make lots of choices when they write, and some of those choices will show
their tone.
In which of the following passages does repetition help establish a bitter tone?
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The spoiled child was not easily satisfied, he was not quick to laugh and he did not
enjoy simple pleasures.
There will be peace in our community, peace in our town, peace in our homes
and peace on Earth.
The brave girl beat the dangerous dragon, got through the dangerous jungle and
survived the dangerous journey.
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My mom told me what happened and I cried until my tears filled up the car and I
nearly drowned in them.