Olaudah Equiano was scared of the slave ship. He passed out cold because he knew just by looking at his captors that he was never going to get home again. The captors looked different than he and the other enslaved people. He decided that they must be evil because of their appearance. The conditions aboard the ship were the worst imaginable. The smells were awful. Olaudah Equiano wouldn't eat. He was beaten by the men who enslaved him. This student example uses less engaging sentence structure. What could be improved? Check all that apply.

It could vary the words and phrases used to start sentences.

It could begin sentences with different parts of speech.

It could begin some sentences with prepositional phrases.

What about this summary makes it objective? Check the three best answers.

The writer used first-person words like “I” and “me.”

The language doesn’t include the writer’s reactions or judgments.

The language includes only the emotions that Olaudah Equiano described.

The writer avoided using loaded language.

The writer includes personal opinions.