Now, take ONE of your jots and write a one page reading response on Ghost by Jason Reynolds, using the questions above to further analyze one of the following: Character, Setting, Conflict/Problem, or Your Choice. Be sure to use good paragraph structure, specific details, and text evidence to support your thinking. [Remember to use TREAT! T=Topic sentence; R=Reason; E=Evidence; A=Analysis; T=Tie it all up]

jot: any part from the book

  plan: i will begin with a quotation about the importance of unity in a community. then, i will state my claim that an activity will unite our school by creating a shared vision, purpose, and direction. in the body, i will use three main points that describe the different avenues the students can take: through a variety of clubs, through a special event, or through an awareness week. i will provide evidence about other towns that have unity activities and the kinds of events that they include. pictures will illustrate my three main points in action. for the ending, i will restate the main idea in a new way and pose a question to keep the audience thinking. 

it probably should so i can spam dank memes

it would be d because the however is more proper and the comma is placed in the right spot