Read the excerpt from Jan’s rhetorical analysis of Hillary Clinton’s address to the United Nations’ Fourth World Conference on Women. Jan is analyzing Clinton’s use of parallelism to highlight how women’s rights affect communities. Clinton states, "If women are healthy and educated, their families will flourish. If women are free from violence, their families will flourish. If women have a chance to work and earn as full and equal partners in society, their families will flourish. And when families flourish, communities and nations do as well.” Here, Clinton uses parallelism to achieve her purpose of bringing "dignity and respect to women.”

Which revision of the final sentence best achieves Jan’s purpose?

A) Repeating the word “flourish” creates a positive tone and achieves the purpose of bringing “dignity and respect to women.”
B) Mentioning families and communities conveys inclusivity and achieves the purpose of bringing “dignity and respect to women.”
C) By repeating the phrases “if women” and “families will flourish,” Clinton uses parallelism to clarify whom she wants to help.
D) Clinton’s use of parallelism and repetition of the word “flourish” underscores the power of women’s rights to build a better world for everyone.

(not a)

Read the excerpt from "the most dangerous game." a man, who had been hiding in the curtains of the bed, was standing there. "rainsford! " screamed the general. "how in god's name did you get here? " "swam," said rainsford. "i found it quicker than walking through the jungle." the general sucked in his breath and smiled. "i congratulate you," he said. "you have won the game." rainsford did not smile. "i am still a beast at bay," he said, in a low, hoarse voice. "get ready, general zaroff." the general made one of his deepest bows. "i see," he said. "splendid! one of us is to furnish a repast for the hounds. the other will sleep in this very excellent bed. on guard, rainsford." . . he had never slept in a better bed, rainsford decided. adrian is writing an essay about "the most dangerous game.” which detail from the excerpt best supports his idea that rainsford is unchanged and still feels that the hunter is justified in killing the hunted? a man, who had been hiding in the curtains of the bed, was standing there. "swam," said rainsford. "i found it quicker than walking through the jungle." rainsford did not smile. "i am still a beast at bay," he said, in a low, hoarse voice. "get ready, general zaroff." he had never slept in a better bed, rainsford decided.

Ineed a hook for a persuasive essay on vaccinating your kids and why you should

What type of people did not belong to any of the 3 estates in medieval english society?