correct and rewrite the following sentences. 1. i lived in sudan since 1930. 2. she died before her husband came. 3. I have written a letter to her last monday. 4. i am reading English for the last six days. 5. The new hotel has been opened last Saturday. 6. he had gone to Washington last week. 7. The train leave the station before i reached there. 8. I wish my men had been coming quickly and find us 9. at the moment the baby sleep in the cradle. 10. He goes out for ten minutes.​

I lived in Sudan since 1930.

Explanation:

Last monday I wrote letter to her.                                                                                         From last six days I'm reading english.                                                                               Last sunday the new hotel was opened

Last week he went to washington

Before I reached there the train left the station

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.