Change to simple past or present perfect
1. i (not/see) you for ages
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I have not seen you for ages.

I hope this helps

the black night was split open like the coconut

it says that it was totally black in the mind of a person but suddenly his mind opened like a coconut with the sweetness of the coconut water and the white color inside it.

or

the black night was thrown like a coconut and it slit apart with its sweet water coming out .

to show how the cables work.