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What is the narrators main conflict in this passage

1. in the bold portion of the narrative, the author tries to use a flashback to develop tension. however, the flashback does not create tension. rewrite the flashback scene so it develops tension right at the beginning of the story. (15 points)

According to this article , in what way does the message about obesity need to be refined ?