Can u mark it ? (Ielts task 2 ) And give me any advice pls !

Nowadays, most teenagers are encouraged to spend time for gap year when they finished learning in high schools, then they enter colleges or universities to travel or work. In my view, this way may affect both pros and cons in people who decided to do that.

Firstly, students may miss the ability to apply their knowledge to solve these assignments in their classes. Specifically, when they decide to spend about a year relaxing, they may forgive any knowledge in your brain. This to their memories will save in your brain for the short-term if they do not practice or review again. Therefore, Young people may lack knowledge when they come back to universities.

However, Pupils may get more benefits from working or traveling for twelve months. Because a year is not a short time, students may find jobs to get salaries. Especially, pupils who have difficulties with financial, they may save money to pay fees for their courses the next time. Additionally, Students will have good opportunities to approach different environment, leading to they can improve their skills, knowledge, or abilities when they work in teams in any firms for their career in their future.

In a nut of shell, roaming or working before study universities are affected both benefits and drawbacks in people who decided to solve their problems. However, this may have more advantages when people choose to take a rest for about a year, they will meet their objectives follow to their plans in the future.