substitue the active voice for the passive voice to make the following sentences less wordy and more effective?​

- Developers are building many new apartment houses in my neighborhood.

- We changed our plans abruptly when we received her message.

- They served the turkey after the soup.

Explanation:

Active Voice is characterized as the grammatical construction in which the subject itself undertakes/performs the action while in passive the object and the verb lead the sentence and the subject turns to be the recipient of the action. In the active voice, the emphasis is on the subject while in the passive voice the emphasis shifts to the object and the action.

As per the question, the given sentences are converted from passive to active which has helped in making it more precise by removing the words like 'by,' 'being,' 'was,' 'were,' etc. Since the sentences are framed in present(are being built) and past indefinite(were changed, was served), the active voices are framed in the same tense.

sensory details?

so i`m assuming you are writing something from a bats (the animal) point of view. if this is the case, you can use sights, sounds, feelings, and tastes.

and idk what you mean by domain, but all of the sensory details will depend on where the bat is.

a bat doesn't see color very well, so its surroundings will be dulled.

it can hear super well. so maybe it can hear the insects on the ground

feelings. you can imagine how a bat would feel from its perspective. it all depends on where it lives.

maybe it can taste the salt in the air, or smell water, or something. all of these details are completely dependent on where it is located.

hope this .

each morning i wrote my name

on the dusty cabinet, then crossed

the dining table in script, scrawled

in capitals on the backs of chairs,

practicing signatures like scales

while mother followed squirting

linseed from a burping can