While travelling throughout the United States of America, Hans hiked the Appalachian Trail, surfed in the Pacific Ocean, drive across the entire continent and sailed down the Mississippi. How should this sentence be revised?

While travelling throughout the United States of America, Hans hiked the Appalachian Trail, surfed the Pacific Ocean, drove across the entire continent and sailed down the Mississippi.

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While travelling throughout the United States of America, Hans hiked the Appalachian Trail, surfed the Pacific Ocean, drove across the entire continent and sailed down the Mississippi.

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b. the poet identifies with private people.

    in the stanza, dickinson states she doesn't wish to seek fame and recognition from the public eye. nor is she afraid of authority figures, and you can definitely tell she isn't hiding something. more as she identifies with private people, who are not known by the community