Select one of the four themes in Animal Farm and write an essay of at least 200 words that explains how that theme is developed through events in the story and character interactions. Use details and excerpts from the story to support
your answer.
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Word Count: of 200
OVERALL SCORE:
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to eliminate ambiguous remote or broad reference it is necessary to focus on anaphoric reference. by definition "anaphoric reference means that a word in a text refers back to other ideas in the text for its meaning." the references should be clear and leave no room for ambiguity.

in the first case the pronoun it probably refers to the car but it has not been mentioned before so we should replace it for the car. in doing so the statement becomes clear.

in sentence number   two   the pronoun he refers to charles dickens the author. yet, the first half of the sentence is about the book a tale of two cities. to repair this it would be better to rephrase the first half : after i read   a tale of two cities by dickens, he so as to remove the remote reference.

the answer is c. it calls attention to the urgency of the message

can u plz include the section