The lion snarled and opened its mouth to reveal long, sharp teeth. Danny could see a skinny string of meat dangling from one of its front incisors, probably left over from the last time the lion ate. “I wonder what it had for dinner last night,” Danny thought, inching away from the gigantic beast. “I hope it wasn’t anybody I know!” Check the two examples of vivid details.
“to reveal long, sharp teeth”
“the last time the lion ate”
“from the gigantic beast”
Think about your topic. What vivid details can you include? Brainstorm a list.