In a poetry workshop, which statement would be an appropriate comment about the metaphors in a poem? I was completely confused by all of those metaphors.
None of the metaphors make any sense to me.
You should probably avoid trying to use metaphors.
It might work better to stick with one metaphor.

the anwser is went creeping down the river again, across the wide lonely marshes to the sea.

i longed to go with them out into the world to seek my fortune in foreign lands—africa, india, china and peru!

and, dreaming of the lands i had never seen, i'd sit on there, watching till they were out of sight.

hello,

this starts with

the areas residents asking congress for admission.

this is the first step in the process of admitting a new state,

- i.a -

by explaining that it took the same total time to travel by plane as it did by train

can you be a bit more specific