Read Zoe's story draft A Winter Walk
Zach plodided down the street behind his dog Ginger. Ginger's leash was wrapped tightly around Zach's wrist, as she pulled him along.
Singer wasn't bothered by the winter wind or the snowflakes that started to fall around them. Her tail wagged in happiness. Zach couldn't help but
Smile Ginger was so happy Zach was home from school and that they were out on a walk together.
Just a few more steps, Ginger. We are taking a short walk today." Zach said.
Ginger slowed and turned around to look at Zach. "It's really not that cold when you have a fur coat on," she said.
Zach stared at Ginger. "Did you say something, Ginger?
Zoe wants to replace the underlined sentence to show Zach's surprise.
Which revision should Zoe use?
O 1. * sounds like you just talked to me," Zach said.
O 2 think those were words you just used." Zach said.
3. What could he have heard right? Did Ginger just talke
4. it was windy, but Zach wondered if he had just heard Ginger speak