Which paragraph shows the most effective use of transitions to improve the flow of ideas?
A. Although we do not have a signed contract, I have been working with your events
coordinator for several months. Moreover, during all of that time, she did not say anything
about an upcoming price increase. We held the conference in Denver last year, and it was a
success, but we had a written contract by now. Despite the lack of a signed agreement, I
believe that the increase does not apply to our group. Specifically, all the costs were
conveyed to me by your events coordinator, and I consider that a verbal agreement. As a
result, all of our planning was based on what she sent us and told us,
B. First, I have been working with your events coordinator and she didn't say anything about
an increase coming up. Second, we had a successful conference in Denver last year, but we
also had a written contract by now. Third, although we do not have a contract signed, I
believe that the increase does not apply to our group. And finally, all of the costs were
conveyed to me by your events coordinator and we talked them over in agreement. All of
our planning was based on what she sent us and told us.
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