16. What can you do to make a persuasive essay more persuasive? (Select all 3 correct answers.) Revise your thesis statement, making it easier to recognize.

Provide more evidence in support of your essay's claim.

Add transition words and phrases to make ideas flow smoothly.

Replace rhetorical, highly nuanced words with more neutral words.

revise your thesis statement, provide more evidence and add transition words and phrases

Explanation:

the correct answer is the name of the author of the quotation appears at the text leading up to it   apex 2018

michael’s company should invest in the updating of every section as well as data and processes technology and software. through the analysis of the manufacturing process, the company can take a clear approach towards the best way to improve not only the process but also de final result. some of the main problems that manufacturing companies face are the waste of material due to disorganized processes and the lack of real-time process checkings. this can be solved with specific software and machines that can turn paperwork into the digital era and that will reduce the time employees take on that, being this time better apply to control the production process and communication among different sectors of the company, the product will be made in shorter time with better quality and more profit