Which rewrite of the following sentences uses the most concrete nouns? After a long day sewing shoes by hand, the shoemaker
returned to her house in the mountains, where she
discovered all of her belongings were missing from her
living room. She phoned for help and waited in the front of
her house until some people arrived to observe her
situation.
A. After a long day sewing shoes by hand, the shoemaker returned to
her cabin in the Alps, where she discovered all of her furniture,
china, rugs, and glass animals were missing from her living room.
She phoned the police and waited in her garden until neighbors
and police arrived to observe her losses.
B. After a long day sewing shoes by hand, the shoemaker returned to
her house in the Alps, where she discovered all of her belongings
were missing from her living room. She phoned for help and
waited in the front of her house until some people arrived to
observe her losses.
C. After a long day sewing shoes by hand, the shoemaker returned to
her house in the mountains, where she discovered all of her things
were missing from her living room. She phoned for the police and
waited in her garden until some people arrived to observe her
situation.
D. None of the above are correct.