I'll try the slash, the pain is so bad, I shouldn't have done it, I hope you can help me not to be suicidal, please guys, I hope you can help me stop doing this, I'm doing it T^T T^T ​

what's this for ? is everything all right ?get well soon.\

Don't try it. Please!

Don't try it. Please!Tell us your problem, maybe we can help you.

Again, please, please don't try it.

"the sandy walls seemed to collapse in on themselves"

and

"the bloodshot waters seemed to have no bottom"

(you didn't attach a copy of the poem, but i'm answering as best as i can)

since a simile compares two unlike things using like or as, it kind of gives an item the ability to do something it can't.

example: "the player was like a tiger on the field"

in this sentence, the simile conveys the idea that the player was fast and strong, like a tiger.