WHO CAN REVISE MY ESSAY AND MAKE IT COLLEGE LEVEL WRITING? PLEASE ONLY ANSWER IF YOU CAN HELP. THANK YOU :)

When the telephone rings incessantly, what is it that the men want to have happen? they want the phone to be answered because it is jangling their nerves. they want mr. frank to go to the office and answer it because they are afraid it might be bad news. they want mr. frank to go to the office because they think it might be miep. they want mr frank to ignore the phone.

If the poem is about going mad when love is lost, what would happen if love didn’t die? identify the independent clause. a if the poem is about going mad when love is lost b if love didn't die c what would happen d when love is lost

Which fits best in the empty box above?