Sensory detail means description that includes our five senses: sight, sound, touch, taste, and smell. As humans, our most prevalent sense is usually sight, so many authors’ descriptions use that as the dominant sense. Read again the excerpt from Of Mice and Men and then see how many descriptions you can find using each sense. They can be explicit (written outright) or implicit (implied; you may not read about the scent of the barn, but you can smell it while reading the passage).

People can make sacrifices like not going somewhere even when they want to, or not eating a certain food, or skipping something for a friend or family member. you can determine it yourself when you are thinking about what to do, such as: do you really want to go to the (input whatever) lets just say zoo, or do you want to your friend study so she can go to the dance next friday? (input whatever)the value in making sacrifices is being a true friend or family member, and seeing how it will affect others. it is very important!

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