Which revision corrects the inappropriate shift in verb voice? Standing and turning aroundthe bride was noticed by everyone. when the bride was noticedeveryone stood up and turned around. Everyone stood up and turned around when they noticed the bride. Everyone stood up and turned around when the bride noticed them.

edmund spenser and john bunyan also influenced hawthorne. : )

i hope this you with your work : )

i think it is b. hope this !

i dont know if your mis-read or whatever but that says 30 points also. its not so very surprising knowing that the words he spoke was english, the aspect of his "language" i'd say is pretty rare and is very unique to pronounce.