Plz answer! Use the drop-down menus to identify revisions that
improve the language in the passage.
Which revision would improve sentence 2?
Which revision would improve sentence 3?
(1) The accomplishment, not the effort, is what
impresses people. (2) No one has ever bin hired to be
a dentist because you worked hard in dental school.
(3) Instead, one has to accomplish the task of
graduating from a school of dentistry, that's how you
become a dentist. (4) Likewise, no one would ever hire
a struggling actor, no matter how talented, to host a
TV show. (5) Only an actor with name recognition and
several movie or TV appearances would be considered
for it. (6) Thinking that effort is more important than
luck is like thinking that water isn't needed to have a
swimming pool
Which revision would improve sentence 5?

"where are you taking me? " the car hesitated, or rather gave a faint whirring click, as if information, somewhere, was dropping card by punch- slotted card under electric eyes. "to the psychiatric center for research on regressive tendencies." he got in. the door shut with a soft thud. the police car rolled through the night avenues, flashing its dim lights ahead. which statement best describes the intended aesthetic impact of this excerpt? o a. by showing leonard obeying the police car, the author reinforces the theme of surrendering one s individuality. o b. by relating the way the car responds, the author underscores the theme of the dangers of a mechanized of society o c. by having leonard, a seemingly normal person, taken to a psychiatric center, the author injects irony, leaving the reader surprised o d. by showing leonard communicating with another person, the author satisfies his need for human contact, leaving the reader hopeful