Use the drop-down menus to identify revisions that improve the language in the passage.
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(1) The accomplishment, not the effort, is what
impresses people. (2) No one has ever bin hired to be
a dentist because you worked hard in dental school.
(3) Instead, one has to accomplish the task of
graduating from a school of dentistry, that's how you
become a dentist. (4) Likewise, no one would ever hire
a struggling actor, no matter how talented, to host a
TV show. (5) Only an actor with name recognition and
several movie or TV appearances would be considered
for it. (6) Thinking that effort is more important than
luck is like thinking that water isn't needed to have a
swimming pool
Which revision would improve sentence 5?

For the strangers that came to town you will write a paragraph explaining the main conflict. you will also compare and contrast the perspectives of the protagonist and antagonist. view the grading rubric as you complete your assignment. this is your guide to a super submission. for this assignment, use the novel or short story you chose to read for module 5. write a paragraph explaining the conflict and the perspectives of the protagonist and antagonist. review the example in the lesson. be sure your paragraph mentions the title and author in the first sentence briefly summarizes the plot identifies the main conflict describes the protagonist’s perspective on the conflict provides a line of dialogue that the protagonist says to support your idea (text support) describes the antagonist’s perspective of the conflict provide a line of dialogue that the antagonist says to support your idea (text support) includes a closing line to summarize the character’s views uses correct grammar, punctuation, and spelling