What change should be made to the sentence when editing for correct comma usage? After studying for an hour I decided to go outside and get some fresh air. Select one: O No change necessary.

O Aſter studying for an hour I decided to go outside, and get some fresh air.

O After studying, for an hour, I decided to go outside and get some fresh air.

O After studying for an hour, I decided to go outside and get some fresh air.​

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

being ignored by someone and then accepting the fact was really tough

the answer is a.

explanation:

the clause "looking toward the south" modifies "a funnel cloud." it's not really the cloud that's "looking," but grammatically, that clause is modifying the cloud.

is this multiple choice?