Pick out the new word: My name
is sophia. I live in
New
York. It
malls
a big
and bear
lot of
lutiful place. There are
Parks, museums, building, and
favorite place is the
Museum of Natural History
because a like dinosons. We
usually go there on Sundays. And
after going to the
museum we go
Central park to have a picnic​

try to do soaps tone.

s-subject

o-occasion (the reason the author wrote the poem)

a-audience (who is this poem mostly for)

p-purpose (was it to convince, inspire, etc. the audience)

s-speaker (can be the author or another character, like is a child, adult, woman, elderly, animal narrating the poem)

tone- the mood the reader gets from this poem

mood- the mood the author had with their own poem

meaning- what do you think the meaning is?

message- what is the author trying to explain to the audience? like what is the theme?

if you still don't get it try showing everyone the poem so they could unravel it

i've read it so how can i ?

the answer should be the first one. "many people find his lyrics very moving."

it by far makes the most grammatical sense and is very objective, removing any first person from the original sentence and keeping with the sentence fluency.