PLEASE HELP ME Read your rough draft and revise it, if necessary, to make sure it does what is required by the assignment. (Also add anything you were not able to check on the checklist from the previous page.) Finally, submit your rough draft to your teacher. The rubric below will be used to evaluate your draft.

no its not a run on sentence however i think you meant wet suits not sours also a run on sentence would be like surfers surf all winter long in southern california by using wet sours to keep them warm and the live their all year long  

because most jews were in the concentration camps and dying horrible deaths while anne could be with her family in a warm place with shelter, food, water, and a place to sleep.

im pretty sure a would be the answer