Read the paragraph from Carla's personal narrative. Raul and I argued about the science project. He crossed his arms over his chest and spoke in a strained voice.
Clearly we had different ideas, but which one of us would have an idea about how to solve our differences?
Which change to the paragraph would most help Carla paint a picture for readers?
adding details about the science project
replacing the information with dialogue
changing the details used to describe Raul
making better use of first-person onouns