How is the following sentence improved by the revision? Original sentence: Hester was judged by the community for her sin.
Revision: The community judged Hester for her sin.
improves connotation
deletes repetitive words
uses more descriptive language
removes passive voice and correctly places modifier

Im giving 98 point to who answers first and fast i do not need you to give me the answer just some or ideas will be great, i am stuck and not sure what to do you will submit your prewriting documents for the character analysis essay. submit your completed brainstorming and outline graphic organizers. the brainstorming graphic organizer should be complete and show evidence that you have considered several characters and their characteristics for your essay. the outline graphic organizer should demonstrate a plan for writing and include appropriate and sufficient textual support.