Monty is writing an argumentative text about not having exotic animals as pets. A classmate read an excerpt and suggested that Monty needs to strengthen his credibility. What are two changes Monty can make to strengthen the credibility of his paper?

Include direct quotes from animal experts about the cost and care of exotic pets.
Use stronger transitions between ideas.
Include facts about laws related to owning exotic animals.
Remove information about pet sanctuaries.
Share a personal story about visiting a zoo.