WRITE AN ANALYSIS SENTENCE EXPLAINING HOW CLINTON'S DICTION DEVELOPS HER MESSAGE/PURPOSE: "Now, I know we have still not shattered that highest and hardest glass ceiling, but some day someone will — and hopefully sooner than we might think right now." *

faulty parallelism is a construction in which two or more parts of a sentence are equivalent in meaning but not grammatically similar in form.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

the problem is the last sentence, the first two have a basic subject+verb+object structure.

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in all three sentences:

the hikers knew that the hike was six miles, that it usually required the entire day, and it would not be wise to start after 10: 00 a.m.

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