Language Exercise 3 1. Director H. K. Schaffer’s third movie has received widespread critical acclaim. This movie is entitled The Return, and she is the daughter of legendary playwright George Schaffer.

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The Return, the third movie directed by H. K. Schaffer, daughter of legendary playwright George Schaffer, has received widespread critical acclaim.

The daughter of legendary playwright George Schaffer, director H. K. Schaffer’s third movie, The Return, has received widespread critical acclaim.

H. K. Schaffer’s third movie is The Return: as the daughter of legendary playwright George Schaffer, her movie has received widespread critical acclaim.

2. Neuroscientists have made an important discovery concerning the prefrontal cortex of the brain. They discovered that this governs impulse control in humans. This discovery can help us to understand the causes of criminal behavior.

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have discovered that impulse control in humans is governed by the prefrontal cortex of the brain, which can help us

have discovered that the prefrontal cortex of the brain governs impulse control in humans, which in turn can help us

have discovered that impulse control in humans is governed by the prefrontal cortex of the brain. This finding can help us

3. Electric cars may not be as environmentally friendly as we think, because the electricity they use is often produced in coal-burning power plants, this can produce large quantities of greenhouse gas.

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the burning of which

which

which, when it burns,

4. Regular exercise not only strengthens your muscles, it also strengthens your brain by keeping it well-oxygenated.

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muscles; by keeping it well-oxygenated it also strengthens your brain

muscles, but also it oxygenates your brain to make it strong

muscles, but also strengthens your brain by keeping it well-oxygenated

5. Widely regarded as one of the most influential economic treatises of the 20th century, John Maynard Keynes’ The General Theory of Employment, Interest, and Money forever changed the way social scientists view recessions.

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John Maynard Keynes, with his book The General Theory of Employment, Interest, and Money,

The General Theory of Employment, Interest, and Money was written by John Maynard Keynes, which

John Maynard Keynes, through his book The General Theory of Employment, Interest, and Money, which