Read the following excerpt from a speech meant for the general public:

welcome to this evening's performance of the the tale missy may. i would like to applaud these students for the hard work they put in to make the play one of the best in the annals of this institution.
which revision will make this speech more appropriate for an audience of elementary students?
a. change "evening's performance" to "tonight's dramatic presentation."
b. change "the annals of this institution" to "our school's history."
c. change "the tale of missy may" to "the story of missy may."
d. change "hard work" to "considerable effort."