Which is not an appropriate thesis for an essay comparing the safety of artificial sweeteners? although both authors carefully document their sources and present ample evidence to support their claims, the statistics and expert testimony that keitel cites is ultimately more convincing. blackwell’s reliance on personal stories and dated reports makes his argument less convincing than keitel’s. keitel argues that artificial sweeteners are safe, and blackwell asserts they are not. keitel’s use of statistics and government reports makes her argument that artificial sweeteners are safe more convincing that blackwell’s assertion that they are not.

Read the excerpt from hemingway’s a farewell to arms. we parked the cars beyond the brickyard. the ovens and some deep holes had been equipped as dressing stations. there were three doctors that i knew. i talked with the major and learned that when it should start and our cars should be loaded we would drive them back along the screened road and up to the main road along the ridge where there would be a post and other cars to clear them. which best describes hemingway’s style of writing in the excerpt? straightforward and simple, while still relating a lot of information to the reader long-winded and offering far too much information to the reader overly complicated, making it difficult to interpret and understand the text effortless and uncomplicated, with little meaning for the reader to interpret