If a teacher asks a student to provide more elaboration in an essay, what does this mean?

a) the essay needs more supporting facts or examples.
b) each main point needs to be restated.
c) the essay needs to be longer.
d) the essay’s topic sentence needs revising.

The correct answer is A. The essay needs more supporting facts or examples.

Explanation:

In writing, the word "elaboration" refers to providing and explaining your ideas as well as adding more details to developed a topic or subject in a text. This means if you are asked to provide more elaboration in an essay or any other text is because your teacher finds the details and ideas provided are not enough and more support is needed usually by adding details such as examples, statistics, quotations, facts or other that act as a support for the thesis statement. Therefore, if a teacher asks a student to provide more elaboration in an essay it basically means the essay needs more supporting facts or examples, while others elements such as grammar, length of the essay or the points already included do not need to be changed.

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chapter i -- paris: september, 1792

a surging, seething, murmuring crowd of beings that are human only in name, for to the eye and ear they seem naught but savage creatures, animated by vile passions and by the lust of vengeance and of hate.

during the greater part of the day the guillotine had been kept busy at its ghastly work: all that france had boasted of in the past centuries, of ancient names, and blue blood, had paid toll to her desire for liberty and for fraternity.

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