How's my essay so far?

i'm applying for a florida youth advisory council and one of the requirements is to write an essay on traits that i have that's been the biggest asset to me in leadership situations. i only have two paragraphs (one if you're not counting the intro), but i'd very much appreciate feedback on it so far before i continue writing. thnk yu

the italian poet francesco petrarch did! (:

it is the background information on the characters and setting explained at the beginning of the story. the exposition will often have information about events that happened before the story began. the exposition is often the very first part of the plot.

there is 2 main differences, basically which are the users and the market. the other difference is the kind of content

people who use tik tok are mainly people from east asia, kind of like the app douyin. musically, on the other hand, are used by people from america or european countries.

while tik tok videos show things like daily life videos, comedy, or just funny videos, musically are like people mimicking songs with their own actions, 'imitate' singers and video clips.

hope this !

hygelac - beowulf's uncle, king of the geats, and husband of hygd. hygelac heartily welcomes beowulf back from denmark. hygd - hygelac's wife, the young, beautiful, and intelligent queen of the geats. hygd is contrasted with queen hope this