Read the summary of the section of "the beginnings of the maasai,” where the volcanic eruption and its results are described. as a result of a volcanic eruption, enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. enkai wanted to save his cattle. he grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. the cattle walked down the tree to neiterkob. neiterkob and the maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle. why does the summary need to be revised?

The answer is: The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas.

Transition words or connectors are words and phrases used to relate ideas within a text. In that respect, they help the reader move forward from one idea to the next. They also give the text coherence, and provide assistance to distinguish between main ideas and evidence that supports them.

Transitions may indicate addition, contrast, sequence and cause. For example: also, similarly, first, then, whereas, because and in order to.

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