Read the excerpt from the hot zone. the line of cars followed behind two unmarked military vehicles. one was a supply van and the other was a snow-white ambulance. it was an unmarked level 4 biocontainment ambulance. inside it there were an army medical-evacuation team and a biocontainment pod known as a bubble stretcher. this was a combat medical stretcher enclosed by a biocontainment bubble made of clear plastic. if someone was bitten by a monkey, he would go into the bubble, and from there he would be transferred to the slammer. the supply van was a white unmarked refrigerator truck. this was to hold dead monkeys and tubes of blood. the jargon in this excerpt makes the text sound
suspenseful and makes it more enjoyable.
authentic and allows it to be taken seriously.
creative and it to remain interesting.
truthful and it to be more convincing.