Other details which make this account convincing are:
descriptions of the sea creatures he encountered
descriptions of the water and grass
descriptions of his ship and his mates who were lost
descriptions of his reactions and feelings.
(you can choose more than one)

hello everyone my name is nevaeh, i know everyone needs in some way, shape, or form and i am willing to provide. i set up a google classroom where people can ask me questions and get on work. no question is a stupid question so do not be afraid to ask. i usually only focus on core subjects but if you ask i will with other specialized subjects. i can do essays all the way to power points : )

my google classroom is the code is 7hr2k4